Hero By Night

[Greywind]

http://herobynight.keenspot.com/d/20061020.html

 

[Narf the Mouse]

Ok, so there's one of two formats I could see here. It looks like either a webcomic, or an illustrated book. I'm going to give what I hope will be concrit for both cases.

 

If it's a webcomic:

 

1) Too much text. Your art should tell most of the story, or you should consider the advice under "If it's an illustrated book".

 

If it's an illustrated book:

 

1) A lot of the art clearly fits under "things someone would tap into a book", complete with "actual" tape. That's good.

2) Unfortunately, a few pictures seem to pop out of the "book" or overlap both pages in a way that knocks me out of suspension of disbelief.

3) Sadly, I find the main font you are using hard to read.

 

Other than that, it looks pretty good.

[csyphrett]

I think it's a recommendation to let people know that the strip has started again. Like your fanfiction recommends in the NGD, Narf. Otherwise I doubt he needs criticism since the start date is almost ten years ago in 06

CES

[Greywind]

There's the journals.

 

There's an actual comic book.

 

Main thing is that there's new material.

[Narf the Mouse]

I think it's a recommendation to let people know that the strip has started again. Like your fanfiction recommends in the NGD, Narf. Otherwise I doubt he needs criticism since the start date is almost ten years ago in 06

CES

Hmm...Probably should have checked the date on the page.